These are my strongest from the photo shoot.
The 'he finished' was written with lotion to have connotations of semen and enforce the pun of 'he finished' However I don't like how messy it looks and the photo doesn't look good in black and white or in colour, also the rest of the text is lost. I don't like the layout even though the message it quite strong.
The group of three tissues is too much like a spotlight rather than a dodgy lit place. Also the text layout doesn't work with the image, the image focus seems to be too small and the negative space isn't effective in this layout.
The strongest is the bottom one with one tissue. It got the best response with critique from my peers saying they felt 'creeped out' and 'it makes me really think about changing my privacy settings' which is exactly the response I want. I need to work on the type a little and also see how it prints e.g. if it's too dark.
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