Monday, 18 August 2014

Final Two

I put my final two ideas on facebook for further feedback and people liked the tissue one much better even though they said that masks had improved it didn't have the same level of impact. This lead to a concern that because this idea was thought so far back in the process would it be okay to use an idea that was from before after I've developed so many other possibilities.



This was a question for my tutors, I asked two of them today the same question and they said it was fine and what sometimes has to happen in the design process. So I am going with the tissue idea and the tutor suggested I changed the heading it make the space from line 1 to line 2 smaller for better reading so the gap isn't as big and then the text isn't as disconnected. Also to change the tag line from 'privacy settings.use them' to 'use your privacy settings' and use italics so it was calling people to action.
This is the poster with those changes also with the change in the photo as I wanted to make the laptop more obvious to connect it with the internet and social media:








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