This was a question for my tutors, I asked two of them today the same question and they said it was fine and what sometimes has to happen in the design process. So I am going with the tissue idea and the tutor suggested I changed the heading it make the space from line 1 to line 2 smaller for better reading so the gap isn't as big and then the text isn't as disconnected. Also to change the tag line from 'privacy settings.use them' to 'use your privacy settings' and use italics so it was calling people to action.
This is the poster with those changes also with the change in the photo as I wanted to make the laptop more obvious to connect it with the internet and social media:
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