I am not going with the 'he finished' written in lotion because it's the weakest of the 4. I put up the other three on facebook to get feedback and people liked the tissue one and thought the mask one was better but needed a different background. So I will explore backgrounds and someone suggested making 'he finished' bigger so the title was more obvious and to lighten the laptop so you could see it better. So now I'm down to decided between the two so I will work on both of them and put them up on facebook again to get further feedback from my peers
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